Monday, February 5, 2024

Red hair and freckles

 


15 comments:

  1. damn, dated a girl just like that over 50 years ago. talk about a blast from the past ! went to a seafood place and found out the hard way that I can not eat it.
    she never spoke to me again after that . I left for the army not too long after that.

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  2. Student often came in to the cafeteria early mornings while I was grading papers. Grew fonder and fonder of her as the days passed. Wrote this one day and slipped it into her English Lit folder when she went to put her tray back on the rack and dump her dishes.

    Incognifox Spring 1989

    Satisfying.
    That’s what she is
    Pleasant, not pretty
    Healthy, not heavenly
    Sensible, not sensual
    Durable, not delightful

    One man’s treasure: Daddy’s.
    Red hair, green eyes
    White teeth, a bit askew
    and freckles! Everywhere . . . ?
    Somehow perfect, though, for her
    Heavy-duty body
    Off-the-rack clothing
    Just-out-of-my-eyes hair

    No model, this . . . no starlet . . . no vision
    Just young woman . . . Everywhere!

    No thousand ships here . . . no fights . . . no toasts
    No nonsense.

    No young man’s fancy:
    Imitation as intellect
    Mimicry as maturity
    Violence as passion
    Laziness as leisure
    Snobbery as class

    Real world lady:
    Person, not presentation
    Face, not composition
    Flesh, not fantasy
    Companion, not conquest
    Friend, not fox


    But I can see her
    With these hardened lenses
    Past these shortened arms
    While younger men prowl . . .
    And I can love her
    With these softer standards
    In these longer views
    While younger men scowl

    And I know her . . . now . . .
    And she never has to know . . . now . . .
    And she knows their minds
    Before they know themselves
    But they never know each other.

    And nobody wins.

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    1. I’m an old man and that even creeps me out a bit.

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  3. I love and adore her hair, her eyes and her freckles. I am not so sure about the lips. They look a bit "enhanced."

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  4. Wowzer, what a beauty. She is a keeper just based on her natural beauty. BobT

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  5. She looks like she tends to be mean as hell while she is gold-digging.

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  6. I didn't need my soul anyway...

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  7. Actually, for me, dating red heads a good portion of my life and then marring one 30 years and running...red heads tend to act like Mt Vesuvius. They hold stuff in and then after a while, they explode in a rage.

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  8. Stunningly gorgeous, just wow…

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  9. Beautiful! However, if she had green eyes........

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